Essay Reflection Paragraph

In my autobiographical narrative three things I think I did well were; first I had a great introduction paragraph. My first sentence was a real attention grabber. I also gave great details and description in my story. The most important thing I need to work on in my next story is putting things in order correctly. I also need to work on is staying on topic and not talking about stuff that has nothing to do with the topic. Ms. Priester is the greatest teacher in the world. To make me become a better writer I think she should give more writing assighnments.

Mother daughter conflict

I think that young teenagers should be able to make there own choices and do what they want to do to a certain extent. When a parent steps in to much they can push there child a whole different direction. I also think that it's okay to want something for your child and you can help them get there but if they dont want to then fall back. I mean you can lead a horse to water but you can't make them drink it. An when the jing  me didn't want to follow in her mothers footsteps she gets angery and still tries to pursuade her to be just like her, but her mother fails to understand that her daughter is her own person.

Autobiograpical Narrative Final Draft

Autobiographical Narrative Editing Form

I am using this form to help me correct my essay. I can view the results in a spreadsheet.

autobiograpgical narrative outline

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I Should Not Leave My Computer Open in Ms. Priester's Class!!!

Ms. Priester is the best teacher in the entire world.  I am so thankful I am in her English 10 class.  I love English even more than football. 

"My Memorable days"

1. The first day my family and I arrived in new york.
2. The day I fell of the roof.
3. The day my little brother fell through a window
4. The day my dad took me to sea world.
5. The day we had a blackout
6. The day my older brother busted his head open.
7. The day I scored my first touchdown.
8. The day my dad took me to  a charger game.
9. The day I found out my mom died .
10. The day I went to my moms funeral.