The Storyteller

1. Green Eggs and Ham By Dr Suess
2. The Cat In The Cat By Dr Suess
3.The Grench That Stole Christmas By Dr.Suess
4.The ABC Book By Dr Suess
5.Hop on pop By Dr Suess


My favorite book of all the above would have to be The Grench Stole Christmas. It was a classic. I don't know why but, that book was realy funny to me. The Grinch was playing a mean cold harted villian but he still made me laugh. In the story the Grinch tries to stop Christmas by stealing everybodies presents but, he meets a little girl named syndie. This girl Syndie climbs all the way up a mountain to get to the Grinches cave. At first she'e scared when she see's the Grinch she's scared but, after a while she figures out that the Grinch is a soft sweet person who is just lonely. Syndie becomes the Grinches Friend and saves christmas.

Chilean Miners Rescue

Well thirty-three chilean miners were drilling seven hundred meters underground when thier access tunnel collapsed. That sucks for them. I would be so mad if that happened to me. I would also be scared of dieing from starvation and getting eaten by a huge worm or groundhog or something. If I had to summarize this incident in one word, the I would use is unprofessional. To make things worse they weren't going to be rescued until after christmas. Also workers drill a whole and sent down a camera. Wow if I was stuck underground I dont think I would be worried about A camera. In that whole they also sent down survival supplies. If that was me in the minners whole I would be so upset, I would try to sue the people who were resposible.

Essay Reflection Paragraph

In my autobiographical narrative three things I think I did well were; first I had a great introduction paragraph. My first sentence was a real attention grabber. I also gave great details and description in my story. The most important thing I need to work on in my next story is putting things in order correctly. I also need to work on is staying on topic and not talking about stuff that has nothing to do with the topic. Ms. Priester is the greatest teacher in the world. To make me become a better writer I think she should give more writing assighnments.

Mother daughter conflict

I think that young teenagers should be able to make there own choices and do what they want to do to a certain extent. When a parent steps in to much they can push there child a whole different direction. I also think that it's okay to want something for your child and you can help them get there but if they dont want to then fall back. I mean you can lead a horse to water but you can't make them drink it. An when the jing  me didn't want to follow in her mothers footsteps she gets angery and still tries to pursuade her to be just like her, but her mother fails to understand that her daughter is her own person.

Autobiograpical Narrative Final Draft

Autobiographical Narrative Editing Form

I am using this form to help me correct my essay. I can view the results in a spreadsheet.

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