Wednesday, January 12, 2011

"through the tunnel" analysis paragraph

I agree with Jerry's idea because if you to want achieve something you have to work hard and dedicate youself to the goal you have. Even though I dont agree with what he did I have to say his actions and efforts made the risk he took convincing. It shows that he's growing up and wants to accomplish something. Nobody was going to stop jerry from reaching his goal because he was determined to go through the tunnel. I still think he could of taken another approach or thought up a smater plan because he put himself in danger .

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