first persuasive paragraph

Even though students at SPA want to be independent we should still put safety first. there are many reasons why I think freshman should not be able to go on self passes. First off we live in a very dangerous and crazy world filled with alot of crazy people. Second  at fourteen they dont have a job so I doubt they would be doing anything constructive. I also think that they haven't reached a level of machurity or responsibilityto have that much freedom. Not to mention the decision making. I mean from experience when teens are out roaming the streets by thereselves they tend to do stupid things.