OAATS analysis of a peer

I am going to write about a guy named Terrell who I happen to live with. Terrell cracks me up because he acts so goofy. In simpler words he's funny. He also comes down to the practice field sometimes and helps out the football team even though he cant play because he's a fith year senior, that show alot of good integrity; however he needs to mature quickly because he's turning 19 soon and he's probly not going to make it on his own in the real world if he doesn't get an education.I dont't mean to be negative but thats real feedback.