typhoid fever-present tense childhood memory

I'm climbing up a tree trying not to fall and break a bone. I finally make it to the top and climb on to the roof of my house. I new it was a matter of time before my brothers started looking for me. While walking to the back of the house I hear the padio door open. instantly I got down as fast as I could but, it was already to late. My older brother Kevin walked out and said Isaac what are you doing up there. I said im just playing. Then he said get down now. I said alright I'll climb down the tree but, hesaid jump down now dont  worry I'll catch you. I said nope I'm climbing down the tree. He then yelled out MOM!!! I told him to shut up. He said jump I'll catch you. so I did and ended up with my face in the sand.

The storyteller from a different point of view

Sitting on the train I started to get a little petulant with the long boring ride.Two girls and my aunt sat next to a bachelor on the train who seemed really annoyed by us children. I guess my aunt decided that telling us children would calm us down or something but, the lame story she tried to tell me and the girls just made us ask questions about the story that was not that entertaining. The bachelor tells my aunt that she is a bad storyteller and my aunt tells the stranger to tell us a story. Then my aunt says to him why don't you tell them a story.The bachelor then proceeds to excite us with his magnificant story.

The Storyteller

1. Green Eggs and Ham By Dr Suess
2. The Cat In The Cat By Dr Suess
3.The Grench That Stole Christmas By Dr.Suess
4.The ABC Book By Dr Suess
5.Hop on pop By Dr Suess


My favorite book of all the above would have to be The Grench Stole Christmas. It was a classic. I don't know why but, that book was realy funny to me. The Grinch was playing a mean cold harted villian but he still made me laugh. In the story the Grinch tries to stop Christmas by stealing everybodies presents but, he meets a little girl named syndie. This girl Syndie climbs all the way up a mountain to get to the Grinches cave. At first she'e scared when she see's the Grinch she's scared but, after a while she figures out that the Grinch is a soft sweet person who is just lonely. Syndie becomes the Grinches Friend and saves christmas.

Chilean Miners Rescue

Well thirty-three chilean miners were drilling seven hundred meters underground when thier access tunnel collapsed. That sucks for them. I would be so mad if that happened to me. I would also be scared of dieing from starvation and getting eaten by a huge worm or groundhog or something. If I had to summarize this incident in one word, the I would use is unprofessional. To make things worse they weren't going to be rescued until after christmas. Also workers drill a whole and sent down a camera. Wow if I was stuck underground I dont think I would be worried about A camera. In that whole they also sent down survival supplies. If that was me in the minners whole I would be so upset, I would try to sue the people who were resposible.

Essay Reflection Paragraph

In my autobiographical narrative three things I think I did well were; first I had a great introduction paragraph. My first sentence was a real attention grabber. I also gave great details and description in my story. The most important thing I need to work on in my next story is putting things in order correctly. I also need to work on is staying on topic and not talking about stuff that has nothing to do with the topic. Ms. Priester is the greatest teacher in the world. To make me become a better writer I think she should give more writing assighnments.

Mother daughter conflict

I think that young teenagers should be able to make there own choices and do what they want to do to a certain extent. When a parent steps in to much they can push there child a whole different direction. I also think that it's okay to want something for your child and you can help them get there but if they dont want to then fall back. I mean you can lead a horse to water but you can't make them drink it. An when the jing  me didn't want to follow in her mothers footsteps she gets angery and still tries to pursuade her to be just like her, but her mother fails to understand that her daughter is her own person.

Autobiograpical Narrative Final Draft

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Ms. Priester is the best teacher in the entire world.  I am so thankful I am in her English 10 class.  I love English even more than football. 

"My Memorable days"

1. The first day my family and I arrived in new york.
2. The day I fell of the roof.
3. The day my little brother fell through a window
4. The day my dad took me to sea world.
5. The day we had a blackout
6. The day my older brother busted his head open.
7. The day I scored my first touchdown.
8. The day my dad took me to  a charger game.
9. The day I found out my mom died .
10. The day I went to my moms funeral.