Essay Reflection Paragraph

In my autobiographical narrative three things I think I did well were; first I had a great introduction paragraph. My first sentence was a real attention grabber. I also gave great details and description in my story. The most important thing I need to work on in my next story is putting things in order correctly. I also need to work on is staying on topic and not talking about stuff that has nothing to do with the topic. Ms. Priester is the greatest teacher in the world. To make me become a better writer I think she should give more writing assighnments.